Showing posts with label WRITE. Show all posts
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Friday, April 29, 2011

Human Interest Stories: From Tabloid Sensationalism to Texts Worth Reading



Each day the broadsheets and news programs feed their readers and followers news regarding politics, business, crime, sports, celebrities and many more.  Most of the stories focus on presenting facts and figures about topics such as elections, global warming, war efforts, cancer research, sports athletes’ salaries, latest technology and others.  Although most of these topics are useful to know and of great importance to most, sometimes you would like to hear how an issue really affects a community, a family or an individual.  This is where a human interest story enters.
A human interest story is one where you have a human lead.  It is a feature story that presents the side of an individual or a group of individuals in an emotional manner. It may talk about people’s achievements, concerns and problems or a human disaster and how the human wave is coping.  This type of story is written in such a way that it elicits both interest and sympathy for the person or persons involved.  A human interest story is often called by journalists as ‘the story behind the story’.  They point to the person in the local interest story as ‘the face behind the story.’
Newspapers and magazines abound with human interest stories about everything from the life of soldiers or their families, volunteers in famine stricken Africa, persons with unbelievable achievements, survivors of cancers and other health issues, to natural disaster and financial ruin survivors and much more.  On television, there are human magazine shows tackling similar topics but are more thought provoking and heart wrenching for viewers because you see the actual person or persons describing their experience.
Another source of human interest stories is the internet.  If you are interested in finding this type of feature story online:
  1. Type ‘human interest stories’ on the search tab of your browser.
  2. Refine the search by entering what topic the story should be about.  For example, you can look for stories about Afghan refugees, famine, bank foreclosures, a blind swimmer, a child prodigy and many more. 
Below are some websites you may want to check out for human interest stories:
  • CNN – go to World’s Untold Stories for video versions of human interest stories.
  • UNICEF – type ‘real lives’ in the site’s search engine to bring you human interest stories around the globe.
  • International Middle East Media Center has human interest stories focusing on the Middle East region.
  • The Salvation Army has very short human interest stories for quick reading.
  • Reader’s Digest - Look under ‘Inspiring People’ to read about individuals who went beyond what they thought they are capable of achieving.
For more human interest stories, check out the websites of the following:  local and international newspapers, magazines like Time and Newsweek, television news programs and magazine shows.  They usually have many stories dealing with triumphs and adversities of the human spirit.
Although some human interest stories may tend to be sensationally written, others really peel off the layers of a person or group of persons’ experience and describe how this experience affected them and the people around them.  When you read a human interest story in this jaded world, try to read it with a fresh eye and look beyond the sensationalism.  Allow human interest stories to inspire you to go beyond your comfort zone.  Who knows, maybe you can write one yourself and inspire others.

Have a great week,
Inma.

Tuesday, April 5, 2011

COMPLAINT LETTERS: TIPS, SAMPLES AND TEMPLATES

Useful Links

http://www2.elc.polyu.edu.hk/CILL/eiw/complaint_letter_constructor.htm  View this site as a slide or text, plus exercises.
http://www.samples-help.org.uk/sample-letters/ Very useful.
http://www.businessballs.com/complaintsletters.htm  Different types and templates.
http://www.dailywritingtips.com/dear-sir-and-other-business-conventions/ Good site for writing tips. Rocío, here's someone else wondering the same thing you did in class today: 'Calling someone "Dear" when you're writing a complaint?' :)
http://www.docdownload.com.au/document/content.psp?group=legal,75614&content=44072 Here's to download all sorts of legal templates.


HOW TO GREET AND SAY GOODBYE 

Valediction

A valediction (derivation from Latin vale dicere, 'to say farewell'), or complimentary close in American English, is an expression used to say farewell, especially a word or phrase used to end a letter or message, or the act of saying parting words- whether brief, or extensive.
For the greetings counterpart to valediction, see 'salutation' below.
Valedictions normally immediately precede the signature in written correspondence. The word or words used express respect, esteem, or regard for the person to whom the correspondence is directed, and the exact form used depends on a number of factors — including:
  • the formality of the correspondence
  • the relationship to the recipient
Conventions also change over time, and of course differ by language.
English valedictions typically contain the possessive pronoun yours. "Yours truly" and "yours sincerely" (or its American English variant, "sincerely yours"). Earlier style closings were usually much longer, and often a complete sentence.

 

Formal valediction

English language valediction typically contain the word yours, a contraction of your servant; valediction was traditionally voluminous, a complete sentence of the form:
I am, Sir, your most humble and obedient servant,
A.B.
Or:
I beg to remain, Sir, your most humble and obedient servant,
A.B.

This form is occasionally abbreviated to
Your obt svt,
A.B.
The phrase et cetera may be used in place of the remainder of the valediction, as in
I am, etc.,
A.B.
As well as
YOS,
A.B.

Yours sincerely or faithfully

In British English, valedictions have largely been replaced by the use of "Yours sincerely" or "Yours faithfully", a shorter form of the archaic "I am yours sincerely". "Yours sincerely" is typically employed in British English when the recipient is addressed by name and is known to the sender to some degree, whereas "Yours faithfully" is used when the recipient is not known by name (i.e. the recipient is addressed by a phrase such as "Dear Sir/Madam"). One way to remember this is the saying "S and S never go together" (for Sir and Sincerely respectively) or remembering "Sir Faithful". When the recipient's name is known, but not previously met or spoken with, some people prefer the use of the more distant Yours faithfully, at the risk of annoying the recipient.
In the American English, "Sincerely yours" or "Sincerely" is commonly used in formal correspondence. "Faithfully yours" is rare. Other formulas such as "Best wishes" and "Best regards" (see below) are also common in formal correspondence. In contrast to British English (see above) there is no special convention for combining these with any particular salutation.

Yours truly,

Yours truly can carry either or both of two connotations: as a valediction, and by implication, as an informal reference by a person to themselves – "the speaker".
"Yours truly" is also used in professional correspondence when writing to a client by his name, but signing the letter in the name of the firm where neither "Yours faithfully" or "Yours sincerely" would be appropriate e.g. Dear Mr. Brown ................Yours truly, Smith & Jones
As valediction
Commonly appearing in the US as "Yours truly," or "Yours very truly," use in the UK was an indication that the signatory was of a higher status than the recipient. Since this could be regarded as offensive, and since most valedictions are designed to show respect to the recipient, or at the very least courtesy, it was rarely used and has now become entirely obsolete.
As self-reference
  • "Yours truly made the cake" – a more prudish way to say "I made the cake".
  • "If yours truly hadn't been sick that day..."
In this manner, one may sarcastically refer to a third person present in the conversation:
  • "Everything was going fine before yours truly, here, showed up..."

Yours aye

"Yours aye" is a Scottish expression  meaning "yours always"

Yours hopefully

"Yours hopefully" is occasionally used in letters of respect or complaint.

Yours, etc.

Used historically for abbreviated endings. Can be found in older newspaper letters to the editor, and often in US legal correspondence. "&c." may be seen instead of "etc." (see et cetera).
In Jane Austen books, some letters are signed Yours, etc. or Yours Sincerely, etc.

Regards, kind regards, best regards

Increasingly common in business usage, "regards," "kind regards" and especially "best regards" are often used as a semi-formal valediction in emails. In informal usage, "best regards" and "kind regards" are often abbreviated to "BR" or "KR". The use of "kind regards" is most likely derived from the more formal, "kindest regards," which is itself a phrase derived from the even more formal combination of "Kindest regards, I remain,""yours" or "truly yours" or any one of a number of valedictions in common usage.

Miscellaneous

Other less formal expressions exist, often some variant of Best wishes such as All my best or, simply, Best. For family members or intimates, an expression such as Your friend, Your loving son or (in the case of lovers) Your Albert may be used; or the name may simply be preceded with All my love or Love.
Less commonly, other adverbs or adverbial phrases may be used, in keeping with the tone of the letter, such as In solidarity or Fraternally. Christian clergy often use Yours in Christ, Sincerely in Christ, or Yours sincerely in Christ.
Within the United States military services, two complimentary closings are standard. Respectfully is used by a senior addressing a service member of lower rank. Very Respectfully or Respectfully Submitted are used by a junior addressing a service member of higher rank. The closing Very Respectfully may be abbreviated "V/R" in brief emails and short notes (or, similarly, "R/S" for Respectfully Submitted), but these closings are always written out in formal correspondence.

 

Valedictions in e-mail

Valedictions in formal e-mail are similar to valedictions in letters: on the whole, they are variations of "regards" and "yours". However, a wide range of popular valedictions are used in casual e-mail but very rarely in letters. These include:
  • Cheers
  • Thanks
  • Keep in touch
  • Take care
  • Warmly
  • Love
  • N/R
  • Best
  • All the best
  • GLHF (meaning: good luck, have fun)
E-mail messages, especially those used for very brief communication, are commonly signed off without valedictions, these being replaced by automatically appended signature texts. Some are not signed at all, since a sender's name is usually provided in the message headers.

Salutation

A salutation is a greeting, in particular a formal greeting used in a letter. Salutations usually take the form "Dear [recipient's given name]". For each style of salutation there is an accompanying style of complimentary close (valediction).

The salutation "Dear" in combination with a name or a title is by far the most commonly used salutation in both British and American English, in both formal and informal correspondence. It is commonly followed by either by an honorific and a surname, such as "Dear Mr. Smith", or by a given name, such as "Dear John". However, it is not common in English to use both a title of address and a person's given name: "Dear Mr. John Smith" would normally not be a correct form. A comma follows the salutation, while a colon is used in place of a comma only in American business correspondence. This rule applies regardless of the level of formality of the correspondence.
If the name of the intended recipient is unknown, the most often acceptable salutations are:
Dear Sir or Madam: (If the reader is most likely a male or the sex of the reader is entirely unknown.)
Dear Madam or Sir: (If the reader is most likely female.)
To Whom It May Concern: (If the writer wishes to exclude the sex of the reader from the salutation and/or to convey that the reader should forward the copy to one more suited to receive or respond appropriately.)
"Gentlemen", commonly used in the past, is today often thought inappropriate unless one is certain one is addressing a group that is entirely male.
In older British usage and current American usage, "Mr.", "Mrs.", and "Dr." are typically followed by a period (full stop), as is "Ms." even though it is not really a contraction, but it is common in recent British usage to drop the period after all such titles. Professional titles such as "Professor" or "Doctor" are frequently used both in business and in social correspondence. Dignitaries and holders of certain public offices are sometimes addressed by their titles, e.g. "Dear Lord Mayor", although in American practice the office is commonly prefixed by "Mr." or "Madam", as in "Dear Mr. President", or "Dear Madam Secretary".
"Miss" is generally reserved for unmarried women. "Ms." is for cases in which the marital status is either unknown to the writer or is irrelevant. For example, if you are writing a business letter to submit a bid to a female purchasing agent, "Ms." is entirely appropriate. "Mrs." is reserved for married women, and usually only those who have taken their husband's last name. In older conventions, "Miss" is always for unmarried women and "Mrs." is for married women. "Ms.", in such cases, is not used.
Messrs. or Messieurs is a term used to address many men rather than "Mr Pink, Mr White, et al." Messrs is the abbreviation (pronounced "messers") for messieurs and is used in English.
Similarly, Mesdames is a term to address many women or a mixture of married and unmarried women. It is pronounced "medam".
On occasion, one may use "Sir" or "Madam" by itself as the salutation. The severe and old-fashioned formality of such a salutation makes it appropriate for very formal correspondence (for example, addressing a head of state, or a letter to the editor), but in the same way the formality and stiffness of such a salutation would make its use in friendly social correspondence inappropriate.

From Wikipedia. The Free Encyclopedia.

Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Thread: TOP AWESOME THINGS...

That last, crumby triangle in a bag of potato chips
Finding money you didn’t even know you lost.
New form of currency

Sticks to the pageThe smell of crayons.






Talking about how much the meal you’ re eating would cost at a restaurant.              
                                          
A second callingSaying the same thing a sports commentator says just before they say it.                               
Taking your shoes off after a really long day.


The idea for this thread comes from a funny, witty, popular blog, launched 3 years ago http://1000awesomethings.com/ which ended up being published as a Book in 2010. I was motivated by Miguel(5thA)when he recently posted a fun video on February 7th (check it out below) about the word "Awesome".

Here´s the deal:

Taking the statements with pictures above as examples, write something that is actually Awesome to you. It can be about anything, ie: Peeling an Orange in One Shot or When Your Boss Leaves Early for the Day or The Smell of Rain or Popping Bubble Wrap, etc...You can take a look at the TOP 1000 Awesome Things expressed by other people in that blog mentioned above by clicking here: http://1000awesomethings.com/the-top-1000/

Mine goes:

1. "Suddenly waking up, thinking your alarm clock didn't go off, and realize it's Saturday."

WRITING PROJECT # 1 IS OVER, LOOKING FORWARD TO A MORE AMBITIOUS ONE...

C'mon you guys!

February 14th was the deadline and the story is unfinished...You have the chance to post what you write, just do it!
Mmmm...a bit disappointing...
Since there should always be something better to look forward to, my expectations for the second edition are still high :-)
And THANKS A TRILLION to those who collaborated: Mª Jesús, Stella, Carmen, Sebastian, Mª Ángeles, Mª José, Rocío...GREAT JOB, you rock!...I'm thrilled! ;-)

HERE'S THE RESULT:

 Home. In it a lie had no place. In it a lie was unthinkable. In it speech was restricted to absolute truth, iron-bound truth, implacable and uncompromising truth, let the resulting consequences be what they might. At last, one day, under stress of circumstances, the darling of the house sullied her lips with a lie--and confessed it, with tears and self-upbraidings. There are not any words that can paint the consternation around her. It was as if the sky had crumpled up and collapsed and the earth had tumbled to ruin with a crash.
María Jesús said...
She felt miserable about it. How and Why had she lied? Was it rebelliousness or weakness?
lluvia said...
Maybe it was just a white lie...but even white lies have unexpected consequences. Maybe she wasn't aware of the incredible burden that a lie could have in their mutual understanding and confidence.
Mª Carmen Morales said...
It was rebelliousness and also weakness. She was really upset with her parents. They had been saying she would get her new bike but at Christmas, it didn’t happend. Her mother said: “Your father is unemployed”, “We don’t have enough money”..... And in the school, when Ms. Grey asked her for her present. She Immediately answered: “My new bicycle!”. It was imposible for her to say that her dreams were broken. Even Camile has her new doll.
sebastian said...
The problem is that when you tell a lie, you immediately have to make up others to avoid being discovered. You usually go into a spiral path that leads to disaster. When her classmate Peter told her to go together riding to the lake that evening, she couldn’t say no. She liked that tall blond boy and the opportunity was too good to be lost
Mª Angeles said...
Suddenly, she remembered that her little neighbour Alice had received an absolutely amazing present for Christmas:a new bright blue bike slept quietly in the Alice´s back door. She could see it every single afternoon while Alice went to the Dance Academy to have ballet lessons. She said to herself that if she would take the bike for a while, it wouldn´t be a theft, only a little loan.
lluvia said...
But nobody seems to understand her reasons, and at this point she was facing a whole trial at home, her family as the jury, and she as the accused. If only she had given it a second thought... but there was not turning back now.
Maria José said...
Poor child! All children lie now and again, it´s normal and even stimulate the development of their imagination. Their parents should play down her lie but are so strict. How to make them see reason?
Rocio said...
She knew it, She knew what will going to happend from the very first moment than she put her hand over the shiny blue bike trying to convince herself that everything would be all right, "it will be only for a little while, nobody will notice". But it wasn´t and she knew it. She knew it, since she arrived to the lake with her nice new summer dress, since she saw Nico waiting for her in the distance, throwing rocks at the lake. She had always been a perceptive girl, her grandmother used to say, and deep inside her, she trusted in her premonitions too. If only could turn back in time.... her mouth was dry fear....
María Jesús said...
When Matilda and Peter met Nico at the lake. She knew that they knew the forest well. Soon her worry became joy.They had something to show her,they had been building a house in a chestnut tree. She climbed up the tree as fast as a monkey. Peter and Nico accepted Matilda as a member of their club.They told her,"she should keep the secret".The tree house there were many tresaures: especially sticks, bows, arrows, beautiful stones...

The beginning of the writing was adapted from Mark Twain's short story Was it Heaven? Or Hell?. You can read the whole text here: CLASSIC SHORT STORIES.COM

Saturday, February 5, 2011

The Writing Project

As I mentioned in class, our classmate Mª Ángeles Barea (5th A) came up with a great idea:  a common writing project. So, here we go! Thanks so much for your suggestion :-)

TASK: Building up a story by adding a paragraph, sentence, even a word. You can contribute as many times as you want, as long as you follow others' threads. Make sure you keep the writing style, but of course feel free to let your imagination and inspiration grow. Our deadline to "close" the story will be February 14th. At the end of it we'll all decide the most suitable title for it. So, join the project and happy writing!



Home. In it a lie had no place. In it a lie was unthinkable. In it speech was restricted to absolute truth, iron-bound truth, implacable and uncompromising truth, let the resulting consequences be what they might. At last, one day, under stress of circumstances, the darling of the house sullied her lips with a lie--and confessed it, with tears and self-upbraidings. There are not any words that can paint the consternation around her. It was as if the sky had crumpled up and collapsed and the earth had tumbled to ruin with a crash.